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Kiss? by *BanditWriter:iconBanditWriter:

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©2007-2010 *BanditWriter
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My character Sunja and my friend's character, Enteris. For once this was just something I wanted to do WoW related. ^^

EDIT: Colored! Gasp! Sunja's face I'm a little upset with...and a few inking mistakes, but not too bad.

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*Formor Jul 6, 2007, 12:54:28 PM
Nice form in this skecth :)
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*BanditWriter Jul 6, 2007, 12:56:49 PM
Thanks! I really liked how this one turned out, to be honest.

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"Be so good they can't ignore you."
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*VampireOrchid Jul 6, 2007, 6:23:37 PM
sunja's hips are the right size, but compared with her thighs... the legs need to be a lot thicker (especially since they're coming toward us). Same with Enteris's legs too... that far one should actually be more horizontal.

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My collaborative webcomic: [link]

Art does not reproduce what we see. It makes us see.
- Paul Klee
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~Drain-o Jul 6, 2007, 7:00:32 PM
I dono if I am imagining this weird, but based on the orientation of the characters (no pun) the one behind should maybe have a 3/4 veiw face? Cause they might be looking foreward. Also, if I were drawing this I would not finish it, but that's just me.
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*BanditWriter Jul 7, 2007, 8:36:35 AM
*tilts her head* hm...okay. I will adjust that.

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"Be so good they can't ignore you."
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*BanditWriter Jul 7, 2007, 8:39:15 AM
yeh, I was actually worried about the direction of his face...sadness. I liked the side view. And why would you not finish it, I wonder?

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"Be so good they can't ignore you."
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~Drain-o Jul 7, 2007, 10:24:37 AM
That's the classic Mr. Counts makes fun of Robbie joke... Just ask any classic art people from our class. I even got an award once, for almost finishing. I think I may frame it... I still have it.
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*BanditWriter Jul 9, 2007, 7:41:30 AM
lol, that makes me chuckle because it's so true...

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"Be so good they can't ignore you."
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*VampireOrchid Aug 13, 2007, 5:18:32 PM
Again, a job well done, especially with the coloring. There are a few minor things I notice, like that chunck of Sunja's hair just sitting there rather flatly, and wrinkles (I want folds where her legs bend...), but overall it's a good step in the right direction.

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My collaborative webcomic: [link]

Art does not reproduce what we see. It makes us see.
- Paul Klee
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